建議文體的寫作

汪毛丫

提出建議和意見的開頭常用句型

文章開頭時，要提出自己的想法和意見，亮出自己的觀點。常用句型有：

It must be realized that ...

我們必須意識到……

Only in this way can we ...

只有這樣，我們才能……

It is high time that we put an end to the （trend）.

該是我們停止這一趨勢的時候了.

It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ...

該是采納……的建議，并對……的進展給予特殊重視的時候了。

There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ...

毫無疑問，對……問題應予以足夠的重視.

Obviously， ... If we want to do something ...， it is essential that ...

顯然，如果我們想做某事，很重要的是……

提出建議和意見的結尾常用句型

文章結尾時，要總結觀點或者問題，優勢劣勢以及給出解決辦法。常用句型有：

From what has been discussed above， we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that ...

綜上所述，我們可以清楚地得出結論……

In a word， the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ... Only in this way can ... in the future.

總而言之，整個社會應該密切關注……這個問題。只有這樣，我們才能在將來……。

For my part， I think it reasonable to ... Only in this way can you ...

至于我（對我來說，就我而言），我認為……更合理。只有這樣，我們才能……

As far as I am concerned， I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that ...

至于我，在某種程度上我同意后面的觀點，我認為……

Personally， I believe that ... Consequently， Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ...

就我個人而言，我相信……，因此，我堅信美好的未來正等著我們。因為……

In my opinion， I think it necessary to ... The reasons are as follows. First ... second ... Last but not least，...

對我來說，我認為有必要……。原因如下：第一，……； 第二，……；最后……但同樣重要的是……

But ... and ... have heir own advantages. For example， ... while ... Comparing this with that， however， I prefer to ...

但是，……和……都有它們各自的優勢（好處）。例如，……，而……。然而把這兩者相比較，我更傾向于（喜歡）……

With the development of society， ... So its urgent and necessary to ... If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society， it will be better and better.

隨著社會的發展，……。因此，迫切需要……。如果每個人都愿為社會貢獻自己的一份力量，這個社會將要變得越來越好。

It is difficult to say whether ... is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of .... however， from a personal point of view find ...

在總體上很難說……是好還是壞，因為它在很大程度上取決于……的形勢。然而，就我個人而言，我發現……。

If we can not take useful means， we may not control this trend， and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly， so what we should do is ...

如果我們不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了這種趨勢，就會出現一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我們應該做的是……

建議文體中常用的連接詞和句型

1. like

We have to compete with our rivals like all our competitors.

我們必須跟對手競爭，就像所有競爭對手一樣。

2. likewise

Likewise， poor nutrition can lead to dental problems.

同樣地，營養不良也會引起口腔問題。

3. similarly

Similarly， not everyone is the enthusiastic type that falls in love with their work.

同樣地，對待自己的工作，并不是每個人都屬于充滿激情的那種類型。

4. equally

All systems of time are equally possible and you can choose any system you wish.

所有時間系統都有同樣的可能性，進而你可以任選其一。

5. in the same way

With humans， smiles work in the same way.

對人類而言，笑容也有著同樣的功效。

6. in the same manner

As you would that others should think about you， think you about them in the same manner.

就像其他人應當怎樣看待你一樣，你需要用同樣的方式去看待他們。

例題 隨著電腦的普及，越來越多的人開始使用電腦。電腦給我們帶來了方便，但是如果使用不當，它就會影響我們的身體健康。請根據下面要點，用英語寫一篇短文Making Complaints，指出電腦對讓人體健康的危害，并提出改善的有關建議。

1. 長時間使用電腦傷害眼睛，影響視力；

2. 對電腦的過度依賴造成記憶力減退；

3. 在電腦前久坐容易引發肥胖，、腰背不適等癥狀。

注意：1. 字數120左右；

2. 可根據內容適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

習作一

Mcking complaints

Computers employed more universally， increasing people begin to use them. There is no doubt that they make our life convenient. Yet， they will affect our health if used inappropriately.

As is well known to us that long-term use of computers is able to hurt our eyes， which influences eyesight. In addition， too much dependence on them will cause our memory to decrease. And we will find our back uncomfortable and put on weight when sitting too long.

In view of what computers bring to us， it is high time that we should take effective measures. Have a rest at intervals when using them. Play outdoor games rather than play computer games. All in all， getting less touch to them as much as possible.

點評 總體來說，這篇習作寫得不錯。

1. 亮點句式

第一句用用到了獨立主格結構Computers employed more universally。

第二句用到了同位語從句，that they make our life convenient作doubt的同位語，對doubt起補充說明的作用。

最后一段的第一句話，In view of后用到了一個由what引導的賓語從句，主干句中用到了it is high time that結構，此結構中從句中的謂語部分用過去時或者是should加動詞原形，注意should不能省略。

2. 高級詞匯

universally， inappropriately， convenient， uncomfortable， effective， in addition， at intervals， rather than。

3. 不足之處

文章的第二段第一句話，As is well known to us that long-term use ... 中出現了語法錯誤，應該改為 As is known to us， long-term use ... 或Its well known that long-term use ...

最后一句話寫成一個主謂結構的句子會更好些，可改為We should use computers properly in case they do harm to our health.

習作二

Mcking complaints

With computers becoming more universal， more and more people start to use computers. You may not know that if not being used appropriately， computers may do damage to our health.

For example， when keeping staring at screens， our eyes will suffer a lot and what leaves to us will only be poor eyesight.

In addition， its easy for us to feel backache and grow obese after sitting too long before computers.

Therefore， we should take measures to protect our health. And my suggestion is that people should control the time they using computers and take exercise occassionaly.

點評 此習作段落層次清晰，句子結構靈活多樣.

1. 亮點句式

with的復合結構：With computers becoming more universal ...。

連詞跟分詞作狀語：if not being used appropriately ...。

主語從句：what leaves to us ...。

表語從句：my suggestion is that people should control the time they using computers and take ex-rcise occassionaly等。

2. 高級詞匯

universal ， therefore， appropriately， in addition等。

3. 不足之處

第一段中的being是多余的。

第二段中的狀語部分用到了連詞跟分詞，在這一句話里顯然不合語法規則，后面主句中的主語跟分詞之間沒有邏輯上的主謂關系，所以不能采用這種結構，應改為When we keep staring at screens。

倒數第二段的句子也不地道。

拼寫錯誤：短文中的最后一個單詞應該是occasionally。

【范文】

As computers are being used more and more widely in our life， they have brought us a lot of convenience. However， attention should be paid to its bad effects on peoples health.

To begin with， the bright screen and the frequently-rolling words on it do much harm to our eyes， and using the computer frequently gradually weakens our eyesight. Besides， depending too much on computers may lead to a worse memory. Most importantly， using computers， people tend to sit before them for a long time. That is the reason why many people often feel uncomfortable in the back. And some may even get too fat.

To improve the situation， I think there should be a short rest every other hour to relax our eyes and brain. Whats more， avoid using the computer unless necessary. After all， we can keep out of the trouble it brings us if we use it properly.